Wednesday, March 3, 2010

Area of Improvement Question

This is were you post for any areas of improvement.

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  1. Alex Ellen Prstojevich! I think that you should have used more expression and fun and exciting words in your paragraphs. Using more voice would have been good, plus we all know you have alot of that.

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  3. One way this blog could improve is by putting work cited in the blog posts.

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  4. the work cited was in the wrong spot.

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